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Ericc
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0 posted 2006-05-25 11:41 AM



And as we part in temporary
ways.

Remember me only with
your senses.

Taste me near with parted lips and
breathe my scent across your
borders.

I will come to you.

Spread your fingers to the night and I will
sweep your hand as distance.

Hear my voice in silent notes
captured by the breeze.

And I will sing you closer.

Hold me with your sight as I fall
against the daybreak.

I will bring to you the new morning.

Remember me...in the depth of
all your senses.

I will come to you.


© Copyright 2006 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-05-25 11:55 AM


Ericc
It has a light quality, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-05-25 12:00 PM


I remember you! Flirty 2 ~ and your poem was worth the wait! It's been awhile!



Linda
Flowers

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2006-05-25 12:08 PM


Another lovely "Eric write" - thank you.  One has to be very sensitive to know of the remembering but it certainly is possible.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-05-25 12:16 PM


Oh yes...I remember you well.
Beautiful Eric...incredibly outstanding.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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with you
5 posted 2006-05-25 12:28 PM


you always write so unbearably romantic, it touches the heart so sweety, so beautifully...and evokes the deepest of sighs..
Bodger
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6 posted 2006-05-25 03:47 PM


Brilliant words

I like the early dawn as well

Dave

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7 posted 2006-05-25 04:45 PM


ah what a reminder *sigh*
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8 posted 2006-05-25 06:11 PM


Hi Eric,  you do have a way of painting
some of the most beautiful images...

Thank You

Margherita
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9 posted 2006-05-27 02:40 PM


Wonderful write, dear Eric!


Remembering you

when dewdrops glisten at dawn

mirroring your soul


I love you.
Margherita

Honeybee
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10 posted 2006-05-27 09:55 PM


*Sighs*  how could she not remember you.....This is beautiful, so soft and airy to read.....like the words of a soulmate beckoning his lover back to him in the next life. I'm saving this~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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11 posted 2006-05-27 10:01 PM


GORGEOUS! as usual, you lifted my spirits with fine thoughts and writing.
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Listening to every heart
12 posted 2006-05-28 12:11 PM





ok.




1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
13 posted 2006-05-28 07:40 AM


how could you not
be
remembered

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2006-05-28 08:21 AM


a lovely write, Eric

M

lost4dm
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15 posted 2006-05-28 09:44 AM


Stirred my senses! Very beautiful.
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16 posted 2006-05-28 03:45 PM


so beautiful..so good to read you....you have a way with romance like no other....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Martie
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17 posted 2006-05-28 06:30 PM


Ericc

"Hold me with your sight as I fall
against the daybreak.

I will bring to you the new morning."

How perfectly lovely!


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18 posted 2006-06-15 03:43 PM


Remember me...in the depth of
all your senses.

I will come to you.

Oh, yes... this is so beautiful... a plea so perfect it hurts to breathe it in. *S*

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19 posted 2006-06-15 04:42 PM


Oh, I like the warmth in this one!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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