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shirtless
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since 2006-04-29
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0 posted 2006-05-24 07:35 PM



A TOUR OF MY SOUL

I have moved
into the depths
of my soul

past
the place
where the last
fish soars

into the reaches
where my bones
press
against
my bones
and darkness
grinds
against
the night

and I know
at any moment
I may burst
into a flame

and I know
at any moment
I may pass
into a light

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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1 posted 2006-05-24 07:47 PM


"into the reaches
where my bones
press
against
my bones
and darkness
grinds
against
the night"
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I love everything about this poem, especially the above lines....I find myself relating to your words.

Melissa~

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2 posted 2006-05-24 08:54 PM


"and darkness
grinds
against
the night"


that was just too cool...


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-05-24 09:58 PM


awesome last two verses!
picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16
Posts 112

4 posted 2006-05-24 10:59 PM


I think the last two stanzas are awesome.
Keep writing,

picturegramic :)

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-05-24 11:51 PM




Listen shirtless, I don't want to start a bad case of ego or anything but do you know how good you are?

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