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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359
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most nights find me short of feathers so I stuff my pillow with the failures of the day and if I sleep in dreams I hear the concussion of sweet broken wings against the brutal air |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Big Frieken' sighs here - another powerful poem that just floors me.....love the images used here. Your way of consise, "power-house phrase" expression is something I'm trying to strive for. Yanno, you're so talented, you should really publish a book  LOLMelissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"so I stuff my pillow with the failures of the day and if I sleep" ahha yeah...if I sleep is the key....  enjoyed the read, I really like the way you write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, I like it maybe because I can relate |
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