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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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By Design Slowing down without a care aloneness filling up the spare of time and thought, no glitter words. A voice is met with sound unheard... The days go forward, tasting cold when thief has stolen what was old. Fashioned in the nighttime dreams this loss of time, not as it seems... More of meaning than one can see when mind is closed to what could be. There's truth of yours and truth of mine behind closed doors, within each line. To quiet moments by design... Waiting, always, for love's define. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It seems time does whatever it wants, while we think we possess it, it actually envelops us. But our memories and thoughts can come and go freely, without time's contraints on love or other emotions. I like the soft touch in this, M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonerful write M loved the last two lines |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sometimes it happens and sometimes it does not. Patience and perspective...One day will be that day. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Brilliant words Dave |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"More of meaning than one can see when mind is closed to what could be. There's truth of yours and truth of mine behind closed doors, within each line." Wow. A lot said in so few words. Enjoyed. JL  |
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