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themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-24 04:23 PM

You have chosen false before
But that’s what life and love is for
To taste the bitter, to know the sweet
To know the poor and know the fine
My love does age, as does the wine
For words are worth no breaths
But actions live and never rest
Have my actions not foretold?
My love for you will not grow old
Choose wise and true for love is blind
And feel your way to love for love you’ll find
Find mine; find mine!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-05-24 04:58 PM

excellent

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-05-24 05:47 PM

I thought this was great!
TD

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2006-05-24 05:49 PM

This is smooth and hopeful, we can never have too much hope. Thank you for the innocence in this.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-05-24 10:05 PM

uplifting write, much needed

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-05-24 10:43 PM

what a cool love quest write

picturegramic
Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 112

6 posted 2006-05-24 10:53 PM

A loving write. Enjoyed.

picturegramic :)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2006-05-26 05:16 PM

Enjoyed...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2006-05-26 06:58 PM

This is a gem!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2006-05-26 08:39 PM

I came back to read again this favorite write. Your sonnets are impressive, emotive and well done. You improve with each...but this...pure, the flow is natural...there is spirit unhampered by form.
I really like this one the very best.
TD

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

10 posted 2006-05-26 08:53 PM

this is so shocking to me as to how well this poem is recieved, when i wrote it i didnt even think about it or its quality.
so all of your praise are so very touching and i want to thank you for all the words .

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