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The view from the Gazebo
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The view from the Gazebo |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Two black crows jump through puddle after puddle. A wooden bench stands alone in an early morning shower. Rain soaked grass surrounds a grey body of water. A fountain raises up sending splashes of dullness upwards at the center of attention. In the air it mingles with droplets of colorless rain. Falling backward to its sense of security, slapping against itself like the thunder above. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kellie, I sure like these you are doing...keep it up |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aha, now the poet Kellie peeks out from life's gazebo with some fine lines nicely done! |
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Robert Edward Levin Junior Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 45can't remember. somewhere in midwest |
I've read a few of your pieces... I very much like the way you write. Robert Edward Levin |
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