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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2006-05-23 11:16 PM


Cosmologicicle
By: Noah Eaton
5/23/06

Herschel Circinus is a space cowboy aerobatic,
a dreamer to the manner born, cream gravy idiomatic,
chooses not to see the world as monochromatic,
floating above the clouds a gospel sharp cinematic,
looks like everything’s in apple pie order,
penetrating the cosmos as a spaceship boarder,
bungee launching on course to Sadalachbia Stadium,
tanning in lunar hot springs till his cheeks gleam like palladium,
snowbird of space, silver-surfing footloose,
barrel rolling between the uplink and the abstruse,
having a delicate flair for some solar flare,
leisure wear made exclusive out of thin air,
space scout, may I have a readout,
riding shank’s mare can make you a devout,
rebounding from the black hole to the bean sprout,
hey, kid, what’d you got to lark about.

I know this universe is too diverse,
time too precious to waste and stickle,
so stick out your tongue,
and taste a dripping of this cosmologicicle.
I know its flavor keeps changing,
from each velvety trickle,
so stick out your tongue,
and taste a dripping of this cosmologicicle.

Namby-pamby Bambi’s off on a yellow rocket,
deep into the outer limits’ dry socket,
sweet surrender from the modus operandi,
this intergalactic inner-tube should come in handy,
howling like Serendipity Dog, fruit-batting like Metal Mickey,
snorkeling in the Orion Nebula where it’s always sticky,
hop aboard a Unicorpian to travel the red deserts of Mars,
fly to Dwingeloo to meet Pegasus Dwarve superstars.

I know this universe is too diverse,
time too precious to waste and stickle,
so stick out your tongue,
and taste a dripping of this cosmologicicle.
I know its flavor keeps changing,
from each velvety trickle,
so stick out your tongue,
and taste a dripping of this cosmologicicle.

Have a taste of Centauri Inari,
with a splash of Mu Cephei’s Red Dwarf Tamari,
follow me into the Tarantula Nebula on an epic safari,
park in the Crab Nebula for some of Yesh Yesh Winks’s calamari,
peddling our telescopomobiles by the solar cycle,
and may I remind you not to forget to solar recycle,
from where we’ve been, there’s no final destination,
all you believe is destined not to be simulation.

I know this universe is too diverse,
time too precious to waste and stickle,
so stick out your tongue,
and taste a dripping of this cosmologicicle.
I know its flavor keeps changing,
from each velvety trickle,
so stick out your tongue,
and taste a dripping of this cosmologicicle...

Hang on if you wanna tag along...



"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

© Copyright 2006 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Will Rhyme
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1 posted 2006-05-23 11:20 PM


I don't understand some of the words (not your fault),


still, I can sense the fun in this one!

WONDERFULLY GREAT!!!

Will

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2 posted 2006-05-24 06:33 AM


this is a fun read Noah

love it

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3 posted 2006-05-24 06:44 AM


Noah, this was extremely vibrant, made me feel like I was in Disney Land...

Hugs


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4 posted 2006-05-24 10:33 AM


better remind them all
to buckle up
while riding within
a mistletoe angel's
futurama fantasy funmobile

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5 posted 2006-05-24 03:02 PM


Noah Nova, I'll hang on to your meteoric tail and swing through all the galaxies with you!

You are such a welcomed blast of cool cosmic air!

You are like a Wonder Bra! You "lift" your readers up "and separate" them from their hohum doldrums.

Love from a fellow space cadet,
Linda
Spaceship


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6 posted 2006-05-24 04:05 PM


I don't recall which planet I was on but it was certainly a delight to drop in today to catch this one and to just stick out my tongue and get a taste of your most fun creation or sould I simply say, "Cosmologicicle?"

Smiles,

-Bob

Aroura
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7 posted 2006-05-24 04:12 PM


wow that was so cool! I hope I can read more of your poems sometime!
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8 posted 2006-05-24 06:23 PM


Ah Noah, this was such a fun read!
Now...if I could just hear you singing it...
I can well imagine how great it would sound.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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