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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 At the edge mixed with sand and foam I watch time wash away dissolve and with it my resolve I can’t be angry not here with the swirling at my feet the tug and pull sways me....in memories bittersweet my heart clouds over mimicking the sky it won’t rain and I..... I have nothing left to cry I’m sure you have your reasons understanding them, simply isn’t something I’m meant to do but understand, I have my reasons why I’ll never be able to give up this love I have for you. ~SEA~ ‘I want to swim away |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
"I watch time wash away dissolve and with it my resolve" a favorite topic of mine, amd it seems, poets across the eons. Time! Great write. Thanks Will |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang Susan, this one really hits home |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lovely sad write...sea and sand seem to bring this out. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The sea is such a good place for feelings such as these. Enjoyed!  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate , I often stroll beside the ocean , pouring out my emotion Hope |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have always found the Sea to be a great source of comfort to me, to Sea. Awww gal....hugs to you ......... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
The immenseness and the solitude always engulfs me for the sea is so much bigger, deeper, wider, and so much more all encompassing than we and time itself does indeed seem to stand still and in awe of its presence. Again, I enjoyed reading your poetry. -Bob |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan~I always think of you when I think of the sea. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have found that pain had a way of shaking loose my resolve... Seems better to release, and forgive and both go on...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Palpable sorrow in this one. Beautifully done. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful, poignant and powerful. Eric |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerful feelings expressed so exquisitely! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"At the edge mixed with sand and foam I watch time wash away dissolve and with it my resolve" This part was so awesome it is a great first stanza becuase it kinda pulls you into the poem   Jezzika |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Beautiful Sea.:-) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
these words you've left here on this blue screen flow as beautifully as the ebb and flow of the waves, as they caress the awaiting shores, bringing sad memories, but sometimes new opportunities to embrace the essence of love |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Susan, this is such a sad, reflective write, dearest friend, I sure hope all is well with you as these feelings are ones so many can relate to and sure wash up on the beaches in the hearts of many! (sigh) Bless you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
At the edge mixed with sand and foam I watch time wash away dissolve and with it my resolve'''' you are so lovely....and this is just stunning.... have missed reading youAnd so it those we live with |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
SEA...you know how I feel this one... Beautiful. |
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dvma New Member
since 2006-05-30
Posts 3 |
Wow, that's a lovely poem. Also relates to the way I've been feeling the last week, so now you have me thinking about where I'm going with myself. I gotta go read more of your poems. |
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