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themute
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since 2006-05-08
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0 posted 2006-05-23 06:39 PM



Let our love be the light in the tunnel
For at the end giving sweet smells of hope
That when our confusion ends we will have happiness
Let it warmthen our faces to lure us out
And to give hope for the warmth will be so greater
We will live now in the cold misguided walk
But far into our assumed salvation, we will live there forever


© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-05-24 10:24 PM


Read this a few different ways, and several times.  Enjoyed each round...and the insight that love is hope...and hope is eternal.
I know that.
TD

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