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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2006-05-23 06:02 PM



Childs play indeed
I rather be run over by a wild steed

Effortless my ass
Just bury me under the grass

Manageable is a joke
I rather be choked

Love true Love
Is not just found

Its is a complicated task
Two lovers must ask

Troublesome indeed
Jealousy grows like a weed

Involved every waking moment staying within reach
We all want to be the ones smart enough to teach

Love true Love
Is earned with Pain

Never is it Unblemished but scarred
That is why true love is so hard

But without a doubt it is worth the price
You will never find something oh so nice.

© Copyright 2006 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-23 06:04 PM


lol
loved that opening
good to read your love letters again

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2006-05-23 06:26 PM


It does not sound so simple after all!
It can be quite tormenting as you say so efficiently!

It's true, love needs to be tended to like the flowers, otherwise it withers.

Good to see you back here, dear Thomas.

Love,
Margherita

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