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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2006-05-23 03:33 AM



sunlit, the wind
floats angel hair contrail
in cerulean serenity

sky writing silent prayer
heavenward



© Copyright 2006 Klassy Lassy - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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1 posted 2006-05-23 04:09 AM


Klassy,

   a delicate and tender writing; much enjoyed.

        miscellanea

playing.with.crayons
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2 posted 2006-05-23 06:11 AM


Delicate indeed.
much loved.


cheye

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displaced
3 posted 2006-05-23 07:23 AM


beautiful write ths morning Klassy
Martie
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4 posted 2006-05-23 01:34 PM


This is so beautiful...made me want to lay down in the grass and look up.  
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-05-23 01:42 PM


Oooh this is so lovely Karen!
Much enjoyed this keeper.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-05-23 04:17 PM




Fragile and ready to disappear. All the more beautiful for its fleeting quality Klassy.


El_Campeador
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7 posted 2006-05-23 04:36 PM


Beautiful!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-05-23 05:15 PM


Klassy,
Now this is Klassy.

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9 posted 2006-05-23 05:42 PM


Few words.. big picture..enjoyed..thanks..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

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10 posted 2006-05-23 05:47 PM


a wispy light write
~floating~

Magnus
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11 posted 2006-05-23 06:13 PM


If only I had enough hair to do this.....
Perhaps a wig?

a very beautiful write, thank you.

Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2006-05-23 08:25 PM


Thank you!  You are all so good to me!  

Martie, I was lying down, sort of, watching the clouds.  I was in my car... LOL. There were a pair of birds so high, they looked miniature.  I was enchanted.

Magnus, I've been told hair is only for imperfect pates, but I will share if you don't mind being blonde.  I have enough for both of us.  

  

StevenS
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13 posted 2006-05-24 11:53 AM


Peacefully smiling! :-)
Edward Grim
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14 posted 2006-05-24 11:58 AM


very nice indeed

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D.Lester Young
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15 posted 2006-05-24 12:53 PM


Very well crafted piece, much enjoyed.
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