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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Instruments of love tongue,teeth, erotic torment delivered by you |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Oh, I do like this Paula. I DO! Short, yet saying so much. I love such poems, much like Emily Dickinson. great job!!! Will |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Hmm, I like it. Kinda funky... Well done. “True absurdism is not less but more real than reality” |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Wow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
says so much with so little wording |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thank you all...my well of want hasn't been flowing as deeply as usual, but now that school is out and I have time to think of other things I hope to be here more often |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn girl, love this senryu! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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