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bigboy
New Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 7

0 posted 2006-05-16 08:19 PM

Talk On

I've got rhythm
I know I've got rhyme
I got rap inside of me so divine
Standing in the spotlight
Holding my mic
Waiting on the oppurtunity to express what is right
I've got wisdom; you know I've got words
With this understanding; I want the truth to be heard
I don't want to be an outcast
I've got to real
Living in poverty; I've got a heart of steel
I have a vision that the poor man on top
Not trying to critize someone took a drop
I don't like to talk about politics or policys
Wake up one morning; you'll be overseas
I don't like to salute people; who think they are higher then me
I'm just easy as a gentle breeze
I like to see the ladies; with their form and their shape
I understand the beauty of a beautiful face
I like to see the enviroment; go thru the change
I like to see the benefit; I know we have gained
I like to see the second grader graduate you see
It's a great accomplishment because they took advantage of their abc's
I like to see the children play late at night
Another situation that makes things all right
I got more rhythm; I got some rhyme
I'll get back with you when I see you on prime time
That will be my time to shine

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2006-05-22 10:56 PM

Very catchy write, bigboy...

I enjoyed reading this...

Welcome to Passions!

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-05-22 11:50 PM

welcome to Passions

neat first post, I like it

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-05-23 08:07 AM

Welcome to Passions! I've just the right
and very Special Greeting to send you!

Check your email!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-05-23 11:39 AM

hey bigboy

"I've got rhythm
I know I've got rhyme"

Yes you do...and more...you got poetry! Welcome to Passions!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-05-23 11:45 AM

WOW!! Excellent first post!
Welcome to Passions!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-05-23 12:20 PM

delightful read...

Welcome to PIP

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2006-05-23 02:00 PM

Welcome Bigboy!!

I enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme very much.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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