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A Blending of Left and Right
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A Blending of Left and Right |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Left, left, left, right, left Never in step was she for Out of the box and line she thought; Ideas beyond the norm she sought Cluttered in left brain tasks Creativity had been masked. Then one day her mind turned right Everything new she saw in sight Flowers with stems of blue and green Petals of lilacs floored in dream; Clouds danced upon the ground Variegations of cloud-go-rounds. Everything left just right. [This message has been edited by miscellanea (05-23-2006 04:25 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat last line! I love the concept here, well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful rhythm..much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, Dixie. It's taken me a long time to realize that I am very right brain dominant, and that if I don't feed my right brain urges, my left brain sometimes will go on strike! (Like tonight! I have about ten hours of work ahead of me, but I couldn't push another step until my creativity could peek out! Now I feel relaxed enuf to hit the paper trail!) cathy [This message has been edited by miscellanea (05-23-2006 04:26 AM).] |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Enchantress, Glad to hear you liked the rhythm. (It must be the pounding of my mind to get busy on the task I'm supposed to be doing!!! Grinning at ya! Thanks for stopping by... cathy |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Cloud-go-rounds......I am gonna walk around with that image for days! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Perfect rhythm miscellanea, and I love that last line. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Perfect blending I think! May we never neglect creativity ... it's a matter of health and wellbeing, no doubt! Thank you for this beauty, I can relate! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Loved it! Awesome rhythm. Great to read you again m'dear, wish I could read you more often. Take care  Always, Alyssa Hupomeno. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do so love reading your poetry. You are uniquely and creatively expressive. Your righting, I mean "writing"  , of this poem, perfectly illustrates that the right side of your brain is alive and well! Cute ending! Hugs with love, Linda  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad you let your creativity peek out to play... this is wonderful! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh bou can I relate to this! the feeling you left us with was so right! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
miscee My tumor was on my right brain side...I was so afraid the surgery would mess with my creativity...but I think it's ok...still healing, but ok. Wonderful poem! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank you, thank you, friends! I finally got Part 1 of my paper trail finished about 5 minutes ago! Have much, much more to do, but will get back to you when I can. Until then... miscellanea Martie, it is good to hear you are recovering. Hang in there. From what poems I am able to read, it sounds like your right brain is doing well, as well as your left. Healing thoughts continued to come your way... miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Read this one the other day, C. It's been fun to follow this journey with you and, look, see, you're writing has even changed. Enjoyed this......luv ya.....jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this .. And you have something there about right and left brain. Another thing ... you brought GG out. I miss her too. martyjo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
iliana, So glad you dropped by. Changes, changes... What can I say? I see myself changing from day to day and minute to second. It sure is a whirlwind out there! Wink. Be well. misce ~~~~ late arrival, It is GOOD to see GG and ALL of you! I have been so cramped for time until tonight/this morning when I thought I would burst if I didn't write something. When I went to post it, I was pleasantly surprised to see your name on my thread. Thank you for taking time to respond. I keep telling myself that there is almost light at the end of the tunnel, and that I will be able to catch up on my reading here. See you soon. miscellanea |
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