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Open Poetry #38

From A Dream

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-05-22 11:44 AM

   Caught up in myself
   Blinded by imaginings
    I woke, surrounded
   By a beautiful garden
In which, I had always been

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2006-05-22 12:13 PM

Beautiful tanka; sometimes we do take for granted what we already have - well expressed

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2006-05-23 04:22 PM

Much enjoyed, especially the garden.

- Owl

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2006-05-23 05:11 PM

Uriah,
Now this is a piece of strawberry short cake.

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2006-08-14 11:01 AM

Now this is a beautiful tanka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-08-14 11:07 AM

acres of diamonds
we don't see reality
we're looking elsewhere
seeking beauty and/or wealth
when it is beneath our feet

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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