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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Echo Back My heart has reached for you this night From all around me, echoes back We are always touching The curve of up and down elongates In these times when we are apart Somehow, time has been tender Yet the loneliness I feel is deep Though I could change it if I chose What we share has the power to heal me Surround and conceal me from the harsh This is a real part of closeness Stripped of flowery language In the balance to euphoria I have come to understand the mood How feeding the yearn makes the fire burn We are always touching Symbolically and reverently one Poking questions in the fabric of absolute trust Each time, the solitude of night echoes back your voice to me And I lay down in the strength, held softly in your heart, To sleep Copyright Kkh 5/22/06 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beautiful love poem! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is a real part of closeness "Stripped of flowery language In the balance to euphoria I have come to understand the mood How feeding the yearn makes the fire burn We are always touching Symbolically and reverently one Poking questions in the fabric of absolute trust" ____________________________________________ I LOVE this - you have some great images here. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Each time, the solitude of night echoes back your voice to me And I lay down in the strength, held softly in your heart, To sleep" I hope who ever was in your thoughts as you penned this gets a chance to read this! This IS beautiful!! So much love. JL  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very well crafted poem brought to a fine poetic ending of: "Each time, the solitude of night echoes back your voice to me And I lay down in the strength, held softly in your heart, To sleep" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And they say things about my romance writes? Guess what... you are right up there at the top of the heap with your words. |
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