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Gone forever |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I cry as if you were still here, Wanting to hold your hand through this pain, It rains hard today, reminding me of the love we shared, But you’ve left, your termed ended, What can I do besides all that I have done? Tears will have to stop flowing, So that the heart can began to heal, We shared our love, in this world indeed, Now I know you are waiting eagerly in the next one for me, These thoughts of mine make a trap for fools, For those who love me, are not near to me, You’ve I had chosen to be my love, And now you have left me early in life, Night and day, I’ve had begged and pray, That you would not leave my side, Make it through these rough times indeed, But he had other plans for us, and this is How I keep composed tonight. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So much sadness here, yet you know you are always connected through the soul. Very touching write. Love, Margherita  |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
you conveyed the longing very well. Hope it's not true...sad poem. Love FNG |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Your writing touches my heart and soul. Your suffering made so ever clear. I hope that one day you find the happiness you deserve. Fate works in mysterious ways. Faith and hope will one day lead you to your love once again. Just believe. Whether in this life or the next. Something that I truly believe. I'm so sorry for your loss. |
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