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No One Knows What Tomorrow Holds
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No One Knows What Tomorrow Holds |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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Just another old scribbling that I uncovered last night. I've stuck everything else in here...may as well do the same with this one. No One Knows What Tommorow Holds ******************* I used to play it safe, Cautious, like commiting a crime.. Waiting, for some kind of sign. Clever come-ons would come to mind. They've all stood the test of time. But, I don't have a line to try on you. I just want to spend some time with you. To waste time would be a crime with you. I want to share my heart and mind with you. And I hope the things I say won't cause you to shy away. Scare you, thinking I move too fast These words are meant to join, not to sever. I've had loves that were forever, and forever didn't last. So... I really want to know you. But I'm afraid to take it slow. I really want to hold you. And no one knows... What tomorrow holds. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful song of longing and indeed to speak clearly is important, carpe diem! Too much shyness and caution are the other extreme of being too daring. There is always the golden middle way. And to say it with a poem is a wonderful means to show the desire of your heart. Love, Margherita  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Exactly! How to hit the middle line? Who knows? Enjoyed your words. |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
These words are meant to join, not to sever. i've tried so hard to get her to see that but i don't think i'll ever get this particular kitty kat to purr  |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is Great!!!!!!!!! And I love these lines "These words are meant to join, not to sever." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love is similar to art work... when you choose the art work, will you want it forever, or will trends later change your mind, growing tired of it... Or will you view it as a precious part of your world, something you wouldn't trade or compromise the relationship for... Something someone once told me, brought this to mind... now me, when it comes to love, I'm a cross country runner  thought provoking write |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
so touching and so true enjoyed the read thank you for sharing ~Sheli~ By words the mind is winged |
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