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of etchings and such |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Engraved upon my thin skin, and buried deep within, the etchings of you bleed through. I can't stop them. Even when I try, they seep through my pores, as if all my soul's doors were wide open to you. And in the darkest moments when I am positive you are not real, I feel you holding me, never scolding me. Those are the moments I know your art is true. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sighs* gorgeous!  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is a poem that winds around in your core kacy..and you expressed it very well...thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Kacy, this aches and is beautiful at the same time....I relate, it makes me think of someone, and I'm saving this in my libary  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i can feel his touch on you from this seat |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderfully expressed, dear Kacy. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Can I sigh too? well said Kacy. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A gentle gem, Kacy. Thank you for this beautiful moment. - Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A wonderful softness to this Kacy... I could feel your words~~ M |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Oh ! ::sighs:: Yes! This is so lovely. An astoundingly heartfelt write! Thank you for this blessing. While I am here, I would also like to thank you for placing the first thoughts of tanka into my being. I had not written haiku, senryu, or tanka until I came to PiP. It was through your reply to my first haikus that I learned of tanka. I'm still trying to adjust to the form and sometimes lose it on the pivot line...but I enjoy it so very much. Were it not for those three forms...I would most likely not be writing anymore at all. Thank you so much. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and what a beautiful etching it is Dear gal... positively lovely!!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Such is treasure... Very poignant and beautifully woven in vulnerability. Lovely. Klassy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy....how lovely are those soul connections. Beautiful poem!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Kacy, this was excellent, the fine art of characture... enjoyed!!! |
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