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sonnet 6 |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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How can a man tell of his feelings vast? His grasp upon words can never describe When a lass that loves him says it will last Her eyes tell true so he knows its no lie But because he can never find the words His tender love for her can ne’er be told She loves him so they shall be like the birds Singing and loving until they be old Never saying how lovely there love is Eyes, feelings, touch the skies of emotion Crying for the quiet sea is what love gives Deep in my heart senses can’t sense quotients So our love is left to simple actions No need to tell her my deep attractions |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I dont have words for this Just keep on sonneting Dave |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Truly enjoyed this...and the glimpse into the male mind. If communication is the navigators sonar...then expression must be most powerful beyond the words. Great write. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Eyes, feelings, touch the skies of emotion Crying for the quiet sea is what love gives Deep in my heart senses can’t sense quotients So our love is left to simple actions No need to tell her my deep attractions Beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Maybe there is no need of words when emotions are so deep, still it is a precious gift to express the feelings in words even if they can't do justice ... we do love them! And you did a good job! Love, Margherita |
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