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StevenS
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)

0 posted 2006-05-20 11:59 AM



Civilized Man

When I think about time and space,
and the struggle of the human race.
I can't see a lot of change in the heart of man.

When looking back down through the ages,
from the rise of man and how his heart so rages.
I wonder who will answer for all that blood.

While sifting through the sands of time,
trying to make sense of this life of mine.
I really don't think we've learned one damn thing.

The weapons of old were sticks and stones,
while one man laughs the other moans.
He ain't my brother is always the battle cry.

Some kingly sort with money to burn,
wants to teach the masses what they long to learn.
How to rob and kill their neighbors,
and make them like it.

While waving a flag for a self-rightous cause,
the people fall in line without giving pause.
Whose blood will pay the cost
and for what?

Sometimes I just can't stand
to look upon the heart of my fellowman.
To tell the truth it's a black hole of depravity.

I know you may not like what I have to say,
looking back it's always been that way.
Civilized man always
thinks he's at the top of the heap.

While counting our blessing by what we own,
never considering who we had to walk upon to get it
it's pathetic.

Sometimes I just don't give a durn,
I don't think mankind will ever learn.
I think I'll just dig a damn big hole,
and crawl on in it.

.

© Copyright 2006 Steven E. Stone - All Rights Reserved
picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16
Posts 112

1 posted 2006-05-20 12:12 PM


Some things never....changes!
Generation after generation we make the same mistakes. I understand your frustration. A read that after can only make one shake their head in agreement and than raise their hand and plead guilty as charged.
thanks for sharing this,
picturegramic

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-05-20 01:42 PM


StevenS
In spinning a top one never knows when it will stop. An excellent write.

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-20 02:23 PM


I started to read me as I went into reading this rant

But one thought occurred to me

And I still know

what that thought was

What are

you

going on

about

All the violence, all the agression

There seems to be no point, no aim, no reason

no direction, no thought

Words all are I have

Don't destroys words

Or those who might first be thinking, learning of a talent

And to get some words

Better used

Read these words

Can you not take your words, review them, and try to look at my old friend 'Tx-Rx-Noise'

dave

BROTHER JOHN
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since 2006-04-06
Posts 386

4 posted 2006-05-20 03:37 PM


Dear Steven,

It was not the apple on the tree that caused the fall,

But the "pair on the ground" and the rest of us all!

The problem of evil boils down to a mystery and it maybe we are too afraid to go beyond  this answer and start a blaming game-- God, the devil, etc.  Now you know where this will lead to and that is just the problem and therefore the mystery of why?

Thanks.


Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
5 posted 2006-05-20 04:37 PM


Can I at least

Ask you to look at

the use of the word

'man'

or failing that

go back in history and

dine with the

'Borgias'

People make history

not man

unless you are going to personally give

"birth"

We live with women in various ways - without needing legal title

Other partnerships

Not my business

But referring to the world as men created it

Is nonsense

Too many Woman have produced children

For a man to say

Man created the world

Dave

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
6 posted 2006-05-20 04:55 PM


Fantastic write !

And it is clear to me that your use of MAN is as it is used in referring to...The Human race, Mankind.  And not "gender"

Sheesh   ::shrugs::   LOL

Good Job !

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2006-05-20 07:46 PM


Steven, never give up hope that mankind can move forwards and awaken to the truth that we are One.
I think many feel the way you feel, but we need ACTION, not resigning. Action of Love.
Good write.
Love,
Margherita

Magnus
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8 posted 2006-05-20 09:13 PM


I agree, it is not a gender issue...many
a conflict or war has been waged over the
maids, maidens or damsels in life....Yes,
Man is responsible,  and I too doubt it will
ever significantly change until a major,
very major disaster makes our heads turn
...

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
9 posted 2006-05-21 12:44 PM



"I know you may not like what I have to say"

Steve, I very much like what you have to say
and the way you say it.
Please don't crawl in a damn big hole. We need you here.


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2006-05-21 12:02 PM


What we do learn, my friend,
is that we are not alone;
and that when we align and assimilate,
we can count the number of them
that would bring hope
to change.

Well done, Sir.

Look at all of the thinking you've created!




WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

11 posted 2006-05-21 12:45 PM


I like the way you portray
Real life in your poetry. You have a natural ability of a superior quality with your writing!!!!!!!!!

Martie
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12 posted 2006-05-21 01:51 PM


Steven, my friend

"Sometimes I just don't give a durn,
I don't think mankind will ever learn.
I think I'll just dig a damn big hole,
and crawl on in it."

I understand this place...reaching my hand out to pull you to the place where I see life as so precious, each minute a song...I cannot go to that dark place when there is so much light.  

[This message has been edited by Martie (05-21-2006 03:03 PM).]

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
13 posted 2006-05-21 03:44 PM


Steven - If we are unable to change the intolerable, and that most times is the case, I'm all for digging a hole but that hole is just a personal distancing from ... evil (love that word) and not allowing the world to pull me away from what I believe to be right.  So, in that context it is possible to live in a hole and still enjoy the light of life! But you can "drop in" any time for a visit.  
StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
14 posted 2006-05-23 09:23 AM


Thank you all for your replys as Sunshine says there is a lot of thinking going on here. My point may have been better made if I had called this poem "A Damn Big Hole". I fall in them and so does everyone else. These holes are called fear, denial, arrogance, hatred, and on and on. They might cause us to sit in the safety of our closets with our little candle leaving our fellows in darkness. But are we really of the light if we fear the darkness? I think it is supposed to be the other way around. The world is in dire need of a lot of little candles. We have to deal with these matters, if not we leave it to the hearts of darkness to decide our fate. God Bless! :-)
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