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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-20 11:31 AM


Sand in the morning slipway to a long shore
Women young for now women children poor
Men swimming out to board wooden boats
Out for the fish
And a fire

to roast

Fish move away or die no-ore can we eat
Killing everything that moves

For some

Just a treat

As we drive our food away

Two things matter

The old can open
Self opening tins

And a can opener

Needs a last grasp

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2006-05-20 11:59 AM


Interesting read..thank you..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16
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2 posted 2006-05-20 12:15 PM


The world has certanly changed and not
always for the good. Seems like your
grasping to keep it, as it should.
picturegramic

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-20 01:09 PM


No

Self opening cans are designed for cheapness and of course the ability to buy a knife to use the back blade to lever up the self-opening slot, which then puts a knife you didn't need into a house that an older person didn't want.

Can openers require that rain doesn't fall, so sun and strength power those wrists.

Fresh vegatables require collection and not opening the door to the wrong person

Think for a moment

I am not old nor disabled.

I just use my brain and I know what is 'whatever you choose to call it' but I do from living and working a lot of countries.

I was in Singapore by 16, and Manila at 48, apart from Europe of course.

Deliver what works but you can't sell to people who are dead, and the Governments are notorise from failing use money beyond, what enriches a politician.

You can be as big a crook as you want, if the Government does it, and valued as a 'Statesman'

Dave

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
4 posted 2006-05-20 07:49 PM


So very true Dave.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2006-05-20 09:14 PM


Thought provoking write, dear Dave. It'so sad.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2006-05-20 09:27 PM


Nice writing...James
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
7 posted 2006-05-21 04:58 PM


Thanks

And I always say I wont let emotion run away from me

but it is so stupid

and alwas down to a politician's vote

Who have enriched themselves

and control even more before they started

The UK has now to be considered one of the most incompetent, and the hidden corruption where a rape victim is 'offered sex by a UK INS person', who is only suspended as he didn't break the law by promising her, that he would fix it.

Dave

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