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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-05-20 11:29 AM



Bleak blasted, grey stone,
dust flying down pathways.
Arrid, until falling toward
trees, then glades burst
with flowers, wavering in
breezes, where a spirit
moves to ignite vigour.
Sleek creatures pulsing with
an energy only distantly
remembered from times when
innocence walked softly silent.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-20 11:42 AM


The inner strength, which survives, when it shouldn't

Dave

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2 posted 2006-05-20 12:06 PM


A beautiful passage from one of my favorite
books, Psalms, second only to Proverbs!
The power of innocence, the power of silence,
the power of power!
thanks for sharing,
picturegramic

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-05-20 01:24 PM


remembered from times when
innocence walked softly silent.

Incredible line Phil. Very much enjoyed your soul words today.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-05-20 05:19 PM


beautiful...just beautiful
poettothecars
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5 posted 2006-05-20 07:06 PM


I can feel the flow in your movement of the words, a quick read, but a good read

a poet who cares

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Gaia
6 posted 2006-05-20 07:14 PM


Phil, I find this to be soothing while invigorating. Dusted with the right balance of time and timelessness intermingled.
Martie
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7 posted 2006-05-20 07:19 PM


Just beautiful!!
Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2006-05-20 08:20 PM


quote:
Sleek creatures pulsing with
an energy only distantly
remembered from times when
innocence walked softly silent.


Harmonious sounds of silence.

Love,
Margherita


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