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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2006-05-20 08:52 AM



Before the sun rose
i slipped
toes tipped
in the holy silence

and observed
the newborn breath
before
the little princess
woke and
kissed the sparrows.

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-05-20 09:07 AM


inkedgoddess
A delight to read.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2006-05-20 11:47 AM


Beautiful!  Love it!

- Owl

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-05-20 05:06 PM



Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-05-20 05:30 PM


Ink

You write substance on heat

Dave

bklynboy
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florida
5 posted 2006-05-20 10:07 PM


Works for me!
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