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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-05-20 08:23 AM


Mirror, Mirror

Mirror, mirror on the wall
That shows the sands of time that fall
Though plying at a passive rate
My eyes can see that passing state

My memory flow a picture show
The dance of times adagio
A tango in a rhombic beat
That eats itself in cosmic heat

Intensity that turns to white
Illusions that have taken flight
A flower that has bowed its head
Shriveled up and now is dead

The yearning of the epic flow
The ever waging and the go
The changing of the old to new
The endless ordure of the coup

It’s all wrapped up in paradise
You just step up and throw the dice


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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2006-05-20 08:54 AM


caught the dice
the flying rice
your word bouquet
you fling it nice

got the sillies this morning
thanks for the smiles

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-05-20 09:05 AM


inkedgoddess
A smile or laugh are the payment of pip.
Thank you

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-20 04:53 PM


I'm late to comment on this

I should have been early

And a change of vision as they

change the screen

Leaves words as yours

Hidden

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-05-20 05:13 PM


Bodger
I thank you just the same.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-05-20 06:07 PM


Intensity that turns to white
Illusions that have taken flight
A flower that has bowed its head
Shriveled up and now is dead


that's my favorite part

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-05-20 08:35 PM


passing,
And you are my favorite part.

Debo
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7 posted 2006-05-21 05:35 PM


Oh yes the beautiful circle of life.
You have painted it so bright.

Debo

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-05-22 08:01 AM


Debo
Thank you for the comment.

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