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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-20 07:14 AM


Well I awoke this morning
Feeling good about the day.

Then I noticed last night
It rained on my parade.

So here I sit all broken hearted
Then I thought of you
And a smile started...  

Debo

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poettothecars
Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-05-20 07:19 AM


Just makes me think about my day. In living in a time zone 18 hours ahead of your location.

For your waking is more my own time to consider sleep.

a poet who cares

Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-05-20 10:51 AM


Thanks poettothecars and you have sweet dreams................

Debo

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