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Open Poetry #37

Adam to Eve

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

0 posted 2006-05-19 09:51 PM

Long we fell from that great height,
falling through the failing light.
From where
to here
to know
delight.
Oh, to fall from such a height!

Tell me how you feel despite
that wrong is wrong. Is it alright
to peer
to fear
to know
the fright,
that wrong is wrong and it's alright?

Lay down your troubled head this night.
No doubt your precious in his sight.
You hear
you care
you grow
despite,
that wrong is wrong, we're here tonight!

Hold me tight!!!

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

1 posted 2006-05-21 05:54 PM

I liked the way you put
"wrong is wrong"
I think I read between the lines
And having said that I liked this poem

Debo

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