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Open Poetry #37

Love's Whisper

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-05-19 12:09 PM

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Love’s Whisper
13 May 2006

Was it her smile
was it her heart, kind
Her thoughtfulness
the way she does care

Her eyes of wonder
the colour found in between
A nose cute to touch
her inquisitiveness inside

Lips sweet to tender taste
just to know she was there
This woman of high standing
her Pensacola home

Hearts stretched, spirits to join
each gentle breath to her breasts
She was all of this
to whisper “I love you”

“Love is the triumph of imagination over intelligence.”
H. L. Mencken (1880 - 1956)
US editor

© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-05-19 10:28 PM

"She was all of this
to whisper “I love you”"

ahhha Christopher, you are fast becoming a favorite of mine....

‘I want to swim away
but don’t know how
sometimes it feels
just like I’m falling
in the ocean’
~Blue October

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2006-05-19 10:40 PM

"Hearts stretched, spirits to join
each gentle breath to her breasts
She was all of this
to whisper "I love you"
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Gorgeous! Sighs, this is a keeper

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

3 posted 2006-05-19 11:34 PM

I was never sure about that last line , but once written it was there to stay

a poet who cares

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