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Taking Flight
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Taking Flight |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Taking Flight I'm spur-of-the-moment so take what you can get, I may fall asleep afterwards but for just a little bit. Take your comfort there where you sleep too, I'll lock the door behind me and take a piece of you. I don't know why I come or more so why I leave, I don't mean to hurt you or make you disbelieve or put a feeling in your heart when you wake up alone, you say you won't let go but for years you've always known I love you just enough to keep coming around, even angels with broken wings don't stay on the ground. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
even angels with broken wings don't stay on the ground. words that touched my heart for sure. Only they remind me of one of my own poems. Then it is good to touch a heart, even from afar Sleep well, wake happy and know you do have a friend Perhaps this might interest you Hidden Wings a poet who cares |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
"I love you just enough to keep coming around"...If I had a penny for everytime I've said that exact line to myself...Well let's just say I'd be RICH by now! Thanx |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
some really good lines in this, Dixie though it sings a sad heartbeat |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Now that in your face reality. But nun the less honest. I loved it Debo |
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