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Tom Zart
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0 posted 2006-05-18 12:20 PM


FOREVER MORE


I love to be loved in the morning
I love to be loved at night.
I love to be loved anytime
For love in the darkness is light.

I pray every day to say thank you
For all I have others do not.
I pray every day cause I’m guilty
For I don’t deserve what I’ve got.

Your love is the best of the rest
For your mission in life is me.
Once I was selfish and cruel
But fearing your loss made me see.

God gave Eve to Adam
To smile and suffer no more.
God gave you to me
I will love you forever more.

By Tom Zart
Author of
LOVE WAR AND MORE


© Copyright 2006 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-18 12:32 PM


I couldn't care who you are the author of

your words are good

Dave

Tom Zart
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2 posted 2006-05-18 12:37 PM


Thank you for your time and kind words of support I need all I can get because I'm just a "OLD POET"
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-05-18 02:00 PM


OLD POET OR NOT...your youthful heart is by all means, one of sensitivity, wisdom and great humbleness that seams so nicely the words you share and express
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-05-18 02:31 PM


This was simply loverly!  Roses

An adoring ~ and adorable! ~ write!


EA
Flowers


The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-05-18 03:26 PM



Excellent work Tom!


Tom Zart
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6 posted 2006-05-18 05:52 PM


Thanks to all for your time and helpful words of support it will help me to compose.
Look me up on google under Tom Zart you will find many web sites where you may post your poems for all to see.


Tom Zart

trutodaraiders
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7 posted 2007-01-02 10:11 PM


Tom Doing some browsing in PIP archives looking for inspiration, and came across this poem. Well done Sir.

~Bill  

Tom Zart
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8 posted 2007-01-03 08:50 AM


Thank you Thank you.
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