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Open Poetry #37

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-05-18 09:05 AM

o that morning smile
that wipes the haze
right off
the newborn flower
yet the spoiler of dreams
that sustain the lonely
through the dreaded
midnight hour

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-05-18 10:47 AM

Good to see you...and read you again
it is always such a pleasure...and this was well worth the wait...excellent!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-05-18 10:54 AM

I love the way you revealed the dark side of both sunshine and smiles.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-05-18 07:34 PM

extremely well written, depicting both sides, light and dark. Nice to read you again Mich.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2006-05-18 07:42 PM

yes, interesting how you put both within
and gave them power and effect.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2006-05-19 10:00 AM

Wonderful write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-05-19 05:53 PM

wow!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-05-19 06:17 PM

Without each other, the dark and the light would be so gray. Enjoyed this!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2006-05-19 06:20 PM

nice expressive split in there....Good read.

Eric

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2006-05-19 09:16 PM

Love this - excellent portrayal of balance and duality

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

10 posted 2006-05-20 10:08 PM

Too dark for me............

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