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themute
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0 posted 2006-05-17 10:17 PM



I love not just your lips, but the words that you say
With wit and a candor we think much the same
I love not just your eyes, but the way that you stare
True silence can be met with the fire in the pair
I love not just your cheeks, but the way that you smile
Your carefree laughs hide true feelings all the wile  
I love not just your hands, but the way that you touch
Warm and temperate passion fills my body with much  
I love not just your charisma, but the spirit you contain  
A beauty of all life in one woman sustains


© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-05-17 10:20 PM


A very genuine and unique point of view, loving thoughts.
TD

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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2006-05-17 10:24 PM


I love not just your charisma, but the spirit you contain  
A beauty of all life in one woman sustains


Truly enjoyed this piece.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-05-17 10:27 PM




Excellent work themute. Genuine and sensitive.


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4 posted 2006-05-17 11:28 PM


~sigh~ the lucky lady!
Oh, to be the inspire of such a write!

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5 posted 2006-05-17 11:29 PM


lucky indeed....this is so romantic!
sweetberry
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6 posted 2006-05-24 02:08 AM


While reading this I felt your words thru your expressions...nice write!
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