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bens101
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since 2006-05-05
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0 posted 2006-05-17 06:25 PM





  Curling up on the couch
  listening to your favorite song
  the images fly through your head
  remembering the times
  when you felt really free.


  Life is a simple pleasure
  the soft notes played
  tell a story
  a lost piece of you
  that needs to be held.

  Tell me baby
  where have you been
  I have found the missing piece
  won't you come lie down
  and dream forever with me.


  This story is almost done
  we can float on clouds
  watch litle miracles
  after we carefully make
  this perfect flawless ending.
  Benjamin Prins  2006.

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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-17 06:39 PM


I really can relate to this

I am on a Simon and Garfunkel DVD repeat night after night as I find another nugget

Dave

backtash123
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since 2006-04-22
Posts 46

2 posted 2006-05-17 07:11 PM


this poem is real sweet.
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with you
3 posted 2006-05-17 11:35 PM


*sigh*

poetic tenderness


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