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BIG-MAN-7
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0 posted 2006-05-16 11:45 AM


Journey

The wheels of the mind move round and round
As a ship on an ocean heads southward bound
The destination is set but the route unsure
As the minds first thoughts must be so pure

We instil in our minds throughout our lives
The routes to travel like bees to their hives
But what we don’t know is we set ad distort
From a child to an adult we learn to sort

The lies and untruths that are said in our age
Were put their to try ad protect like a cage
Parents truly believe they are doing their best
But it is later in life we are put to the test

For as we grow older and we duly find
No need for such rubbish that’s stuffed in our mind
If we could only sort out what we really need
Surely we must then become a most peaceful breed

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1 posted 2006-05-16 12:00 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A most excellent first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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2 posted 2006-05-16 12:01 PM


Welcome to Pip! enjoyed this, great flow.
HopeS
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3 posted 2006-05-16 01:47 PM


Mind over matter , wonderfully expressed

Hope

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Excellent first post here Tim
Glad you joined!

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Gaia
5 posted 2006-05-17 02:06 AM


"For as we grow older and we duly find
No need for such rubbish that’s stuffed in our mind"
LOL,I sure wish that were true!
Good to meet you! Welcome to the blue skies of Passions.

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