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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-05-16 07:39 AM


rummaging through the cupboard

And so…
I melt away
into some neurotic
castle in the sky
dancing a surreal postcard
with a limp winged Achilles' heel
tucked under my chin
& those baggy fifties jeans with
heavy bronze cross studs
polished like
friendly bunches of infants
in the fireplace of your arms

one day
smiles politely
like a glass fronted showroom
however
days grow like
rows of gravestones &
fossilized dominoes
in a fence row
somewhere  
along
a
country side dirt road
we once
covered with dimples

imagination hanging out
of its mouth…
like a
distant time-famished bellow
quite fascinating
the heated wings you drew!
running its fingers down our summer
unwrapping some contagious
arch of champagne…
buzzing around
in our heads

we were munching
like cows on some
fertilized blades
of emerald paintings
impressionists
with audacity
owning
a concrete concourse
with
beer belly ladders
sketching
technicolor pumas
in high stepping shoes
gripping our arms
while stretching
some love sick
smiles across
the place
where our dreams
ended

until the day
surfaced with everything
crouched into reality
we had to count smudged
charcoal faces
in each hour of the day
sharing a private joke
supposing like
a PTA gold club card
cutting coupons
out of
expressions that
left our shirts
torn & wrinkled
professing a finish
like the green grocer
struggling
to find some
bloody maggot free
garden patch

my brain grows
slower & slower
as I melt
into thoughts
pondering
what on earth was going on?
a million fizzling bubbles
puddle soaked
with some sense
of spiritual dream
thinking out loud
like air locks
in my head

soooo…
I handcuff myself
to a pyramid
hoping
its
center
points me
towards
a place at the table
of real life
because
the fullness was some
depth of detail
in a floating city
where the games started
with an end
and
where you hear a voice
revile
“Gentleman, start your engines”

I dance
in a pub
with tribal mentality

those reflections
half-misted
wandering
aimlessly
around the libraries
of my soul & mind
rambling a story
growing
like some
fantastic garden
with a stately home

I answer the door
wearing a mask
with little veins
sticking out all over

in a gallery
of some crazy dream
where the days
sneak out
and the nights
rush in

and it feels like I’m really there...???



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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2006-05-16 10:44 AM


LeeJ

"my brain grows slower & slower
as I melt into thoughts flowing
pondering what on earth was going on?
it’s hard to describe!
a million fizzling bubbles
puddle soaked
with some sense of spiritual dream
thinking out loud"

You are a kaleidascope of word images...I'm so happpy to read you again!

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-05-16 11:21 AM


one day
smiles politely
like a glass fronted showroom
however
I know days grow like
rows of gravestones &
fossilized dominoes
in a fence row
somewhere  
along a country side dirt road
we once covered with dimples

~*~

May I echo Martie's wonderment...




StevenS
Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
3 posted 2006-05-17 09:27 AM


LeeJ, you have a way of taking me with you and I always enjoy the journey! :-)
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2006-05-17 06:55 PM


quote:
sketching
technicolor pumas
in high stepping shoes
gripping our arms
while stretching
some love sick
smiles across
the place
where our dreams
ended




Lee! Your poetry is simply breathtaking.
Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
5 posted 2006-05-17 07:12 PM


LOL, but your cupboard is NEVER bare!
LeeJ, your imagery is always like some fantabulous  tossed salad of this 'n that covered with gourmet whatchamacallit dressings.
And a myriad of thought croutons are always there, waiting at the edge of the plate for the brave....

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2006-05-18 10:55 PM


never a bare cupboard offered by you....and the shelflife of your thoughts never expired......
liked the tossed salad as kacy says


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