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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-05-16 03:15 AM



While In Silent Reverie

On the edge of the jetty
Circling with my toes
Ripples start spreading
As mind thought flows

Mirrors upon the water
Circles reflecting me
I glance over each one
While in silent reverie

Pondering in thoughts
Circles I view silently
My silhouette outlined
In peaceful serenity

Blending in tranquillity
Circles grew whole
Sitting here in stillness
In soothing the soul

Hope ©2006
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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
1 posted 2006-05-16 03:18 AM


Ahhh,

this IS such a  very, very  peaceful, rwarding,  read!

Almost like listening to "Amazing Grace".

Thanks Hope.

Sharon (Bubbles)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-05-16 08:21 AM


this was lovely...

good Morning



Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-16 02:29 PM


Hope

I wont bother with words describing

Your image in words

Writes on the back of my eyelids

Dave

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-05-16 05:43 PM


I came back and read this, and it is like 'IceBox'

I get some much of a kick out of your words, maybe 'American Writers' have to be more 'circumspect' and I was 'at an early age'.

I just enjoy the freedom that seems to be your feeling, and the cluttered IceBox viewing the Reigm.

No insult to IceBox his content supreme, just down by the lake

And was it

IceScream

Apologies to both

David will now stop writing

Dave

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