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From Where I Stand
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From Where I Stand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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From Where I Stand I stand upon a doomsday alter And pray my spirit will not falter Calling on my minds declare To stay within my times ensnare The multitude to comprehend Is truly more then I can blend The in and out an endless stream Goes beyond my furthest dream The river runs past gardens shore Which is of course the evermore Where flowers of eternity Collaborate with fantasy And Eden stays in Shangri-la The nearest and the furthest star The galaxy of ever bright The core within the white of light But if you heed the mornings story You will see the dawning’s glory |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fantastic write, dear Seymour! Even though you speak of doomsday ... there is so much awe and wonder and light. Your eyes and your heart have caught a glimpse of the forevermore. Dawning's glory ... just so! Beautiful, very beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You are a love.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved this read and good morning to you, Mr Sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Thank you dear and good morning to you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And Eden stays in Shangri-la The nearest and the furthest star The galaxy of ever bright The core within the white of light" How delighful Sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, Your closing, "But if you heed the morning's story, You will see the dawning's glory," is excellent. Write on!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN Thank you my friend. |
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