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Devious Intellectual
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0 posted 2006-05-15 12:17 PM


16 syllable poem i just wrote after experiencing some mixed feeling of sadness and counfusion..probably doesnt make sense

Brain Dead.......

Sometimes in life people tend to take foot on the incorrect route
We set aside our conscience and ignore the voices of doubt
Ending up in valleys of darkness putting us in the shadows
Deep in our heart depression sets quick and hits critical sad~lows

The world spins opposite to one's broken demented mental state
The fragile balance of sanity starts to slowly desecrate
Looking for heavens gates but finding a valley of lurid death
Every sudden gasp is of failure till the very last short breath

Still chasing lost goals that now exist in another far planet
Heart now cold as stone, anger left it melted into hard granite
Actions speak louder than words, but words cannot ever go unsaid
Now a zombie in the head, memories leave one quickly brain dead


© Copyright 2006 Paul - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2006-05-15 06:32 AM


When memories do that, than it's certainly better not to linger on them. This is indeed a reflection of your dark moment.
May you consider that our hearts and our brains are fantastic organs that renew themselves continuously ... let go and let them realign to Universal Harmony.

You did a good job.
Love,
Margherita

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