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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2006-05-14 03:01 PM


            

I wish some words I had
for this woman I'd call my mom
but I never got to know her
so the words are slim to none,

but in spite all just the same
I miss her so very much.
I wish that I could remember
her very special touch....

God took her away from us
on a very special call
when I was very young
and yet so very small.....

but still I felt her presence
sometimes I even do now
I just wish I could say I love you....
just once.........just.......somehow.....

I know that she was wonderful
so many times I have been told
but if one memory I could recall...
I'm sure it would be solid gold....


{revised and retitled 05-2006}


seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-14-2006 03:43 PM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-05-14 04:29 PM


lovely write

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2006-05-14 05:03 PM



Touching, sad, beautiful and aptly titled.
I'm sure she does know how you feel and reads your words from heaven, it sounds cliche, but very comforting nonetheless?!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2006-05-14 05:09 PM


Thank you, also for sharing the beautiful picture, she radiates love, exactly like you!

This mother-daughter connection knows no interruption, ever. In the feeling of her presence, lies her touch.

Beautiful.
Love and hugs.
margherita

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