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Open Poetry #37

repeat the beat

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-05-13 10:19 PM

Beat the drums
twirl in time
lift your spirit
sing your rhyme

Eyes turn upward
hearts entwined keep
LOVE moving forward
blessings to reap

Put down the arrows
follow the sparrows
search for the seeds
of the truth in deeds

Cast away fear
the way is clear
follow the bright light
that shines at night

Hands that touch
faces of LOVE
keep eyes open
on the dove

Know that since
dawn of time
LOVE enfolds
all sublime.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2006-05-13 10:32 PM

Beat the drums
twirl in time
lift your spirit
sing your rhyme

Loved the spiraling momentum of that verse, Kacy! Yes, there is so much to lift us. Love lifts, however sometimes, I find it does that in a rather strange meandering way!) Enjoyed, Midnitesun,

misce

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

2 posted 2006-05-13 11:02 PM

I like the short tempo of the lines, almost staccato, pointing from one thought to the next -- rhythms of life. The promise in this is heart warming, as it is when you open your hand and a butterfly lands in your palm. Wondrous...

~Klassy

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2006-05-14 09:32 AM

quote:
Know that since
dawn of time
LOVE enfolds
all sublime.

Such a beautiful message, a very captivating song of peace and love, dear Kacy!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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