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themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-13 06:44 PM



My love is in the tender touch
Your hands are in my hair
Our love is expressed in the open mouth kiss
A youth I had missed
Your eyes burn fire into my loving eyes
A passion that is only shown in desires
Believe in only the unity between you and me
And we will live on together forever
I slide my hand down your chest to your side
We used to be strangers and now we are quiet
Alone together with the sounds of our love
If we were to fall into memories from above
We would surely be happy then
Getting on and on and on from when
We love as the singer loves to be singing  
We love as the world has since its beginning  
When you say my name
Oh say my name

When you whisper in the wind
My love will never end
Our children run in the fields of forever
They pick the flowers of yellow and white
As young and as beautiful as nature in sight
With bonnets of cotton and baskets of woven wicker
I cry when I know that they are what we’ve made
Give me love so true so pure as only to be written
Then I will be sadder than before I had wrote it
Thank you for making this real
I love you and your lasting appeal  


© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-05-13 06:50 PM


Lovely, tender write! Nicely penned.
bubblesleave
Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
2 posted 2006-05-14 12:09 PM


Beautiful write!


ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-05-15 10:30 PM


Full of romance, spoken from the heart.
Authentic and pure.  
Well done.
TD

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