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StevenS
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0 posted 2006-05-13 09:38 AM


Dear

You finally made me happy dear,
it brings a tear of joy to my eye.
I wish I had recorded,
every single word of your goodbye.

Then I could listen all over again,
on those dark and dreary days.
Your sad goodbye would shine upon my heart,
like the suns healing rays.

You finally gave me reason dear,
to sing and celebrate.
I wish it had been sooner,
but I'll gladly settle for too late.

Let me get that door for you honey,
you dainty little creature.
I always knew your backside,
would be your most endearing feature.

I do hate to see you leaving on that tried old bus,
as you flee from this disaster.
If you left me on a plane dear,
you could leave me so much faster.:-)


.

© Copyright 2006 Steven E. Stone - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-05-13 09:44 AM


Hi Steve....it is true that sometimes the door closing can be a happy occasion.  I hope all is well with you!  
StevenS
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2 posted 2006-05-13 09:49 AM


Big Hug Martie, yes all is well, just remembering a happy day! :-)
RedStoneEB
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3 posted 2006-05-13 09:59 AM


Thats pretty funny stuff you been wanting to get rid of her for ages and then she decides shes had enough and leaves

Hope you reply to my poem since i took the time to write this

XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-05-13 11:26 AM


haha    Shades of..."Thank God and Greyhound You're Gone"      good job!    
Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-05-13 01:06 PM


Good write here Steven!  
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2006-05-13 01:57 PM


OH, DEAR!  


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7 posted 2006-05-13 01:57 PM


Steve~
Thanks for the Saturday *giggle-schmiggles*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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StevenS
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8 posted 2006-05-13 07:38 PM


Thank you Redstone, miracles doth never cease! :-)

Thank you Uriah, gone can be such a beautiful word!:-)

Thank you Nancy, glad you enjoyed and hugs back at ya! :-)

Thanks for the read Klassy, I love the little smily guy waving goodbye. He captures the essence of my mood!:-)

Thank you Marge,I love giggle schmiggles!:-)

Debo
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9 posted 2006-05-14 08:00 PM


Another great one Steven
I bet you have made it a country song I'd love to hear the music to this one

Debo

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10 posted 2006-05-14 08:18 PM


Nothing like a happy "Dear Jane"...so to
speak...

The Lady
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11 posted 2006-05-14 11:49 PM




"I always knew your backside,
would be your most endearing feature"

Oh Steve. You never fail to delight me. :-)

Sunshine
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12 posted 2006-05-17 08:31 PM



You're such a scamp!




picturegramic
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13 posted 2006-05-18 12:16 PM


One door closing opens another!
Good thing that door swings both ways!
Sometimes goodbye can be as happy as it
can be sad!
picturegramic

StevenS
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14 posted 2006-05-18 08:46 AM


Thank you all very much for the read and reply may you all feel so relieved if you should ever say goodbye. :-)
Tom Zart
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15 posted 2006-05-18 12:11 PM


One more great love poem you are just full of words of love thanks for posting.
Tom Zart.

sweetberry
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16 posted 2006-05-24 02:01 AM


Heartfelt...nice write!
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