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SarBear
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0 posted 2006-05-13 12:16 PM


It's easy to wonder is this the end?
And it's hard to not to care,
when they're never really there.
And, it hurts to be forgotten,
yet, it should never come as a suprise.
This silence speaks more than a million words combined.
Memories of good times aren't erased,
but often blurred with time.
Drowned out with all the negatives,
in the chaos of this beginning demise.

© Copyright 2006 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
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Mesa, Az
1 posted 2006-05-13 12:20 PM


I like it you have the same thoguhts ive had and the same darkness
bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
2 posted 2006-05-13 12:33 PM


I like this!
Archea
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since 2006-05-13
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3 posted 2006-05-13 05:28 AM


very good, i think i felt a little bit of your life through this poem, which i assume is what your looking for.  exellent poem!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-05-15 01:57 AM


I understand the part...when they're never really there...more than I want to...James
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Gaia
5 posted 2006-05-15 10:05 AM



that also might mean
a new warm beginning
could be near

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