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Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-12 10:37 PM

I closed the car door when I loaded my suitcase
After leaving a note of good-bye.
Soon you'll be learning
That I'm never returning,
So I want you to understand why.

That I signed all the papers
My Attorney asked of me
So you'd know how
It's felt all along.

To be so Rejected,
Mistreated, Neglected
In your mansion made out of stone.

As I pulled from the driveway
To that long open highway
I look back on the way things have been.

All your promises broken
Yes, so many words spoken
That I hope never happens again.

Oh, I know you could give more
Then I ever could hope for
But I'd rather be living alone.

Then to be so Rejected,
Mistreated, Neglected
In your mansion made out of stone.

Debo

Archea
Member

since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

1 posted 2006-05-13 03:51 AM

it makes me feel sorry for you... good one

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-05-13 06:38 AM

Sounds like it could be turned into
a song to me...enjoyed the rhythm
and rhyme

M

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2006-05-13 07:05 AM

Debo...Great write, I agree with naked thoughts, it sounds like it could be a song...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-05-14 07:57 PM

Thanks to each of you for your great replys and yes it is a song I wrote about my Parents

Debo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-05-15 01:54 AM

It would be nice if you could do something about the relationship right now, while you're hurting...the pain doesn't just go away because you go away...it takes communication and understanding and forgiveness...James

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

6 posted 2006-05-15 02:03 AM

Yes James it sure does take a lot out of a person. I'm slowly starting to understand and forgive. Thanks for the nice replys....

Debo

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2006-05-15 07:02 AM

So achingly sad!
I echo James' words and it feels good to hear that you are learning to forgive. Why is it so difficult to get along, I'm sure many will recognise themselves in your strong words.
Love,
Margherita

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