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Somehow Tonight
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Somehow Tonight |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Collected like the rain Sweet water sounds Tumbling in ovals Full circle rounds Making waves Day runs in wellspring Sensing and seeking Night stokes an ember Somehow we remember The glint of innocence Colored in jasmine tease Cotton sail on velvet please Moving over ripple Sipping silent thirst Somehow tonight… Warm water beads Our passion pleads Chiffon billows, Bare to waist Moaning willows, Tender taste Full flower sighs From wither rise Somehow tonight Together lies Esteem in fragrant Fantasize Copyright Kkh 5/11/06 |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
seriously this is one of the best in a wile if not of all ive read. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Somehow we remember The glint of innocence Colored in jasmine tease Cotton sail on velvet please Moving over ripple Sipping silent thirst This is lovely TD. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
The rhyme, rhythm and assonance flow nature and the natural into a beautiful and tranquil yet tantalizing living image that lingers in the memory long after the end of the poem. - Owl |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
i was sucked in with the first few lines. that was amazing! Archea |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely write, TD! I thought to quote but would have to do the whole poem. Helen |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
TD, you can write sensual as well as any one person here at Passions...Without a doubt. One day it will snare the right fish for you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful Kathleen... Lovely indeed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Thank you for the Saturday *sighs*~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow that ending! |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
TD this is so feminine so beautiful! :-) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...such tender passion...always such beauty from your pen. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Somehow tonight Together lies Esteem in fragrant Fantasize i can hear the harmony of the flowers singing background..just glorious |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"...The glint of innocence Colored in jasmine tease Cotton sail on velvet please Moving over ripple Sipping silent thirst.... Somehow tonight Together lies Esteem in fragrant Fantasize" _________________________________ BIG Sighs! Beautiful, original with exquisite imagery....being the hopeless romantic that I am I LOVE this! You have true talent, and this is a keeper  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Moaning willows, Tender taste Full flower sighs From wither rise The whole poem is a treat, but the above lines are truly a masterpiece, imo. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Warm water beads Our passion pleads Chiffon billows, Bare to waist Moaning willows, Tender taste Full flower sighs From wither rise" Delicate, feminine and oh, so seductive. Beautiful TD. |
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