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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-05-12 02:56 PM



If I were a cruel woman
I would of tasted your lips
I would let you hold me close
while I felt your finger tips

But it wouldn't of been you
To whom I felt before me
And I'd be somewhat bitter
That you could never be he.

I'm not so cruel a woman
as what you want me to be...
I am just a woman here,
deliver'n some mercy.

-Juju

I am going to not be around to much (one more hour of internet), cause I
'll be at me sisters house so I hope you enjoy. I will miss you all.Newbies keep up the good work, I havent been around to reply due to schoool'n, but oh well I will miss you all.

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-  
*    Juju     *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-12 03:42 PM


I love your words but I do ask 'have you read your words objectively to yourself'.

Dave

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