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What Is Out There Anyways?
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What Is Out There Anyways? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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What Is Out There Anyways?  What's really out there anyways? What's the world busy searching for? Does anyone really know what it is or do they think they just want more? Purpose. Meaning. Floating. Careening. It's all a hope chest, dreams that don't come true, to think what you're searching is there searching you. Happiness. It's inside. People wander from their reside, searching for? What is more? And I wonder now in these passing days, what is out there anyways? . |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A great question poem...there are plenty of questions in life..but sometimes they are answered positively..keep looking for the positives...thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I dont people want understand how their own egos work You haven't changed apart from losing a partner They haven't changed apart from being what they always were You basically get stuffed because "you were one of them and now it needs' too more people to bore everyone to a natural 'exultation' Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Great write Passing Shadows But me I stay the same Happy for what I have and and don't have Debo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Happiness. It's inside." So true passing shadows. This one is a little different for you. I like it a lot. |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
i LOVE ur reflections its light hearted and also vague to convay the question |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"what is out there anyways?" The wonder is that we never really know what's around the next corner and that alone should keep us hopeful - "should" but doesn't always, I know. Believe me, I'd love to know what's out there as well. |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
sounded good to me. i like the setup and also i felt a deeper meaning to it. nice writing... Archea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dixie, I love the changes I've seen in your poetry (not that I didn't always appreciate your writing -- it's that I see even more development...and I like it!). *hugs*....jo |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, Dixie, it's inside that makes us happy with what we have. However, there is a lot out there - we just have to see it - and the greatest things are in the smallest things. There are only small things in the supposedly great things. - Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There is plenty out there to add happiness to our lives..but first you need to open the windows, let the sun shine in and then step out the door and take a chance...that is the only way you will learn what is out there for you. We learn from failures and everyone has them eventually. hugs M |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I guess whats "out there" depends on where one believes the fringes of the "you" ends. No matter. It was a wonderful write. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...I guess we will never know what's in store for us until it happens, then we have to grab a little piece of it and try to be satisfied in our own little world, cause that's all that matters is the happiness of our loved ones and our self. Go for the Gold metal...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! you have all given such insight! Thank you for wonderful replies!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
take the magic moments when they do come, don't look back and don't ask why  |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
anything in the world is out there for all of us, we just wait, and see, and that can be difficult in itself, this was a wonderful write, miss see ya but welcome back!!!! for me at least hehe, keep up the awesome poetry...Poetry can get you very far |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
That was bad reply from me. You didn'd deserve it. I suppose someone of your talent to sound like that, provoked the wrong reaction in me. Maybe I have come the cycle, and my last will be that cycle. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Michele, that was the best advice I've heard all week! Thanks Laura, good to see you too Dave, I'm wondering now if I got slapped in the face and didn't even know it? Have pity on my intellect, but I'll admit I don't comprehend most of what you write so I suppose your reply went straight over my head as well. |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Hey great write makes ya think of the world around you wondering hoping..nice i like it |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
There are goals for us to reach for. That is what is out there. And, as we reach those goals, we will feel a peace and happiness within ourselves. Never, ever give up, my friend. |
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