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RonPrice
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0 posted 2006-05-11 11:20 AM


                    STAR-BURST

William Wordsworth produces poetic work altogether inferior, work quite uninspired and dull.1 He appears to have been quite unconscious of this inferior quality, of the defects of his poetry. He presents his worst poetry to us with the same faith and seriousness as his best. Sometimes his work is dramatic; sometimes it is epic, as in his Prelude. But it is all of a piece, all a product of a serious and sincere mind.  In a collection of short pieces, as in my collection of his Selected Poems2 which I was given by the college I taught English at in 1989, the impression made by one piece is continued, is sustained, by the piece following, indeed, through the entire text.  In reading Wordsworth the impression made by one of his finer poems, indeed even his finest poems, is too often dulled and spoiled by a very inferior piece coming after it.  The reason I have given emphasis to this point raised by Matthew Arnold nearly 130 years ago is that I think it is true of my own verse.

Wordsworth’s finest poetry was written in a ten year period, 1798-1808 in the second decade of his writing of poetry.  He wrote poetry for sixty years, 1790 to 1850. After a hiatus period of 30 years, from 1960 to 1990, during which I wrote some 160 poems, 130 of which are still in my files, I wrote 40 poems in 1991 and 120 in 1992. The years 1991/2 I now see as my initial poetic burst after a long poetic novitiate.  The quality of my poetry I leave to others to assess as Wordsworth did. -Ron Price with appreciation to 1Matthew Arnold, “Introduction to a Book of Wordsworth’s Poems,” Internet Site, 2006(1879); and 2William Wordsworth, Selected Poems, editor, Walford Davies, L. M. Dent & Sons, 1986(1975).

It took off like a star-burst
in that year, mirabile dictu,
part of my soul’s rendezvous  
with its Source in that holy year
with its sacred remembrances,
anticipating a deep encounter
with the forces operating
with bewildering ferocity
in my world at that auspicious
juncture in history, unbeknownst,
in obscurity from most of the world.

Indeed, I paused and reflected
and thus began the early years
of my poetic maturity, if I can
call it that, my reconsecration
and preparation for tasks
yet to be done, heights yet
to be attained, splendours yet
to be unveiled in the wondrous
leaps and thrusts  of epochs ahead,
with new victories, fresh initiatives
and remarkably dynamic years with
their onrushing, quickening, winds.

Ron Price
May 10th 2006.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-11 11:27 AM


welcome to Passions Ron
I enjoyed this first piece you shared and will be looking for more.

Enjoy your stay!

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2006-05-11 12:48 PM


What you offer is very intriguing..I look forward to reading more.

Welcome to Pip!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2006-05-11 01:37 PM


Welcome to Passions!
I look forward to reading more of your seasoned  'mature' writings.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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4 posted 2006-05-12 05:26 PM




I enjoyed this work Ron.

Welcome.


Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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5 posted 2006-05-12 06:14 PM


Welcome to passions...perhaps poets tend to become over opinionated about their own poetry...to include oneself among poets such as Wordsworth who wrote The Daffodils and Arnold who wrote Dover Beach may be being a little above themselves..they are great poets because of the work..every poet writes bad poems....it is the pearls lying on the beach with the flotsem and jetsem that elevates mere writers to great poets..thank you for the information and poetry..look forward to reading more from you..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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6 posted 2006-05-12 06:45 PM


I will as always 'say what I feel'

You are writing a complete 'monkey take'.

I wont waste my time

You can't even deliver coherence,

Revise, read what you are trying to deliver
and then

Dave

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