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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-10 07:48 AM



It's the hand in hand walking
the talks throughout the night
the honesty of eye search
when dawn begins to light

The softness of the hand prints
to ease the worried aches
the knowing of what needs to be
each time the morning breaks

It's all those things I'm missing
as time keeps passing by
wondering when the yester years
become again for I.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-05-10 08:41 AM


It's the hand in hand walking
the talks throughout the night
the honesty of eye search
when dawn begins to light

the honesty of eye search...really loved that!!

what a precious write....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-05-10 09:24 AM


Maureen,
I'm not worried about you. enjoyed

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

3 posted 2006-05-10 10:01 PM


It's all those things I'm missing
as time keeps passing by
wondering when the yester years
become again for I.

Love the ending.
Enjoyed.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-05-10 10:25 PM


~sigh~ a poignant write
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