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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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signal themes And so, it was…. moody yesterday…chocks words! breathing hard… out of prejudiced agreement yes imperfect with untrained eyes mocked...belittled deliberately dressed up with violation however, a lace of white supposes fix determined half blooded author sorting hats wizarding powerful little something’s where interior distinctions require physical exertion sometimes hard... ya know, they almost flew...those little something’s that people insist on giving...gentle into some good night, where wolf eyes become the other side of love... there’s a place which speaks with the dead in deep breath and a wand pointed at lonesome love to defend swans without fear without half seasons in a mind’s eye and there... outside of time a crown of North gives silver threads to dreams and delusions even in humiliating things standing under the shadows of trees... with desire to inflict a robin’s promise~ bonds by which the world wills... through grape crops and stroking psyches spurring the ribs of unflinching candors silent lyrical bullion... stoic unconscious which escapes one’s notice perhaps misshapen perhaps only in slight gesture faintly misguided but entirely with cerulean rose yes, in mundane garnets soaked where a garden stretches between abutting thick folds of multiple sensations call it, a rally cry of white reserve straightforward...of that you can bet bringing closer the grail bird escaping constraints stern burlesque of humanism resurrecting moving water a manic energy shuttles, between two extremes giving matter and memory an instance a pulse a breezy pun, if you will, even if, pale in theme and moment arising in one particle of myriad fates wispy cosmic forces pledging allegiance fledglings of free verse willfully yawning chasms & orderly forms _________________ by Lee J. Erdo Footnote: Dichotomy = a cutting into two, subdivision, or the astronomy Moon phase when half visible: the phase of the Moon or a planet when half of its surface appears illuminated by the Sun That said, how closely tied, or melded, if you will, are the good and bad....chaos & harmony, must be & are...without one, there would not be the other, all elements essential in our lives...forces, energies, combined, how close ties form perfect patterns....in all things...in life [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-11-2006 07:22 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
where wolfs eyes become the other side of love... (great lines) always so much to read and enjoy Lee...you are overflowing with thoughts... enjoyed and so glad to read you again  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a manic energy shuttles, between two extremes giving matter and memory an instance a pulse a breezy pun, if you will, even if, pale in theme and moment ~*~ So many good thoughts, great lines... more, please.  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Without one there would be no other , so true and besides and I do believe we all have two sides Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Woderful fry, I like my eggs over easy. Good morning sweety. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
yes :: bows :: So many times...your words have taken me up in a whirlwind...yet always graciously and gently set me back in the Center of it All. yes :: bows :: |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ So good to be able to read you again!! And ya know, the good and bad thing....it is working in me...for out of my bad I can feel the good arise like some crazy light that refuses darkness. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - You're still amazing - on both sides of the coin! Thank you for a wonderful read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
somebody's been studying...  I've compared reading you to be on the inside of a snowglobe. smiling now, and what is a snowglobe but very pretty chaos, contained. Methinks we are all like that actually. Organized chaos. (and I know you will understand that as compliment.) reading suggestion #1: The Women's Encyclopedia of Myths & Secrets a Harper Collins compilation  |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
An interesting piece, I really enjoyed it, and wish more |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If only I could put that many words on the page and have them all make sense!! |
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